Your speech script has real potential – this was a worthy effort. To achieve, it needed to meet the 4 minute limit, and you were too reliant on your notes when you spoke, which limited your engagement with the audience.
Achievement
Achievement with Merit
Achievement with Excellence
Construct and deliver a crafted and controlled oral text which develops, sustains, and structure ideas.
Construct and deliver a crafted and controlled oral text which develops, sustains, and structures ideas convincingly.
Construct and deliver crafted and controlled oral text which develops, sustains, and structures ideas effectively.
Construct and deliver a crafted and controlled oral text using oral language features appropriate to audience and purpose to create effects.
Construct and deliver crafted and controlled oral text using oral language features appropriate to audience and purpose to create convincing effects.
Construct and deliver crafted and controlled oral text using oral language features appropriate to audience and purpose to command attention.
Your speech script has real potential – this was a worthy effort. To achieve, it needed to meet the 4 minute limit, and you were too reliant on your notes when you spoke, which limited your engagement with the audience.
Not Achieved